This is one of my favorite of yours. I love how, judging by the way she's "sitting," the transformation has definitely got the friend in an amorously feminine state of mind, be he still doesn't notice he's been transformed despite acting differently, at least yet, or at least she's feeling too good to notice/care. I hope you do more like this.
I love how slightly ambiguous your caps, they tell you all about the transformation itself, then show what's about to happen without actually telling it. Especially good in this one: the tranformee doesn't realize he's been changed (but is very sultry anyway, gotta love how well that pic fits), and the friend is beginning to seduce her - we're not shown how the friend realizes the change or even if he's in state of mind to care (I'd like to think he only partly realizes what happened, in a "I don't know how this happened, but you're looking pretty good to me right now" sort of way, not doing so fully until later), we're not told what's about to happen, but we all know a lot of "happy" screaming is going to be involved.
Thanks. I find that I often get tired of caps where everything is spelled out for me. I prefer to leave a bit of wiggle room in my caps to allow the reader to take it in whichever direction best suits their likes.
This is one of my favorite of yours. I love how, judging by the way she's "sitting," the transformation has definitely got the friend in an amorously feminine state of mind, be he still doesn't notice he's been transformed despite acting differently, at least yet, or at least she's feeling too good to notice/care. I hope you do more like this.
ReplyDeleteI love how slightly ambiguous your caps, they tell you all about the transformation itself, then show what's about to happen without actually telling it. Especially good in this one: the tranformee doesn't realize he's been changed (but is very sultry anyway, gotta love how well that pic fits), and the friend is beginning to seduce her - we're not shown how the friend realizes the change or even if he's in state of mind to care (I'd like to think he only partly realizes what happened, in a "I don't know how this happened, but you're looking pretty good to me right now" sort of way, not doing so fully until later), we're not told what's about to happen, but we all know a lot of "happy" screaming is going to be involved.
ReplyDeleteAgain, just sayin'. I like your style, friend.
Thanks. I find that I often get tired of caps where everything is spelled out for me. I prefer to leave a bit of wiggle room in my caps to allow the reader to take it in whichever direction best suits their likes.
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